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WOW PERFECT!
I know the light is diffused and low-key, so maybe the timing just wasn't there, but I feel the colors don't represent the true feeling of this image, and careful manipulation with curves could bring it closer to what the eye can see and the mind perceives.
A thing that really bothers me is a slight tilt to the right - there is no justification for it, and as the image was cropped it could have been rotated (arbitrary, probably less than 2 degrees CCW) to correct that. I am also unsure of the square crop - for me the trees are too close to the left, and IMHO a little more space to the left and quite a lot more on the right would have been more stable. Regarding the vantage point, I am inclined to think (again - cannot say for sure without being there) that a lower vantage point, possible to the right, would have resulted in a stronger image by limiting the color and expanding the snow. My gut feeling would be to balance the mountains with the water (the water would appear narrower as the camera is lowered).
Some of my comments are speculative, but I hope this helps...
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